突击雅思写作:击破无理可说的窘境

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编辑点评: 雅思写作的大作文以议论文的形式考核考生的英语写作能力,因此很多烤鸭反映容易遇到不熟悉的话题而没有论据支撑。因此本文通过“十大论证原则”为考生指处雅思写作的答题思路。

8. 环境和能源原则

如“是否限制使用汽车”

Cons:  空气、噪音污染(air pollution and noise contamination)

能源危机(energy crisis)

9. 道德原则

如“是否拿动物做实验”

Cons:  不人道,太残忍(inhumane, cruel)

10. 权利原则

如“是否拿动物做实验”

Cons:  剥夺动物生存的权利(deprive animals’ rights of living)

例题示范

我们通过一个真题来了解这种方法的使用。

1.Tourism is believed to be a good way of improving a government’s tax income. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of exploring this resource.

通过“十大论证原则”,我们分别将优缺点列举如下:

Pros:经济与就业原则(对国家和地区政府),心理原则(对旅游者),生理原则(对旅游者),文化原则

Cons:  空间与安全原则(对个人),文化原则,环境原则

通过上述分析,正文的结构安排如下:

{原创范例}    Admittedly, there is an opinion that the exploration of tourism exerts negative influences on environmental and cultural aspects.

For one thing, tourists are believed to produce severe environmental pollution, which breaks the ecological balance.

For another, such activities would definitely give rise to cultural conflicts between locals and visitors.

However, on no account can we lose sight that the government, the local residents as well as the travelers themselves gain benefits from the development of tourism.

To begin with, the municipal government is certain to increase the revenue income from this.

Besides, it is obvious that exploiting this resource would provide the local inhabitants with a large number of employment opportunities.

Last but not least, travelers can also broaden their horizon, and relieve the pressure accumulated from work or study.

2.Some people think that using animals for experimentation purpose is necessary for the development of science. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

本题关于拿动物做实验是否有利于科学的发展。在做brainstorming的时候,建议考生可以借助“十大论证原则”,将优缺点列举出来。

Pros:  经济原则,安全原则,生理原则

Cons:  道德原则,权利原则

经过筛选,正文结构安排如下:

{原创范例} Admittedly, there is an opinion that taking animals for the purpose of experimentation is unnecessary.

For one thing, they believe that such activities bring these animals unlimited suffering, which is inhumane and cruel.

For another, a range of animals rights’ protectors are worried that it is a behavior to deprive animals’ rights of living.

However, on no account can we lose sight that animals used for experiment are of great contribution to the development of science.

First and foremost, it is believed that certain kinds of animals, such as mice, share the same features with human beings.

Besides, animals used for experiment are much cheaper than human beings, which reduces the cost on researching.

Last but not least, scientists who use animals to conduct experiment are in the hope to test the safety and effectiveness of newly developed drugs before pilot testing on small group of patients.

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